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oshawacliff


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Help with a new tag line for my display ad in Old Autos. May 15 edition
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I placed an ad in the display section of Old Autos in Dec last year.  Had no responses.

The tag line used was "LOOKING FOR A NEW CARETAKER"

it has been suggested that I might use a different word instead of Caretaker.

It implies spending more money??

Any suggestions greatly appreciated.

Dec ad.

The text basis for the May 15 ad will be more descriptive

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old auto dec 15 ad from computer.jpg



-- Edited by oshawacliff on Tuesday 2nd of May 2023 12:48:15 PM

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The deadline for changes is tomorrow May 3

Any suggestions appreciated.

 

 

 



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Time To Make Someone Else Happy

Looking For A New Home

It's Time To Let Her Go

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Thanks  Bill

Keep em coming!



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oshawacliff wrote:

I placed an ad in the display section of Old Autos in Dec last year.  Had no responses.

The tag line used was "LOOKING FOR A NEW CARETAKER"

it has been suggested that I might use a different word instead of Caretaker.

It implies spending more money??

Any suggestions greatly appreciated.

Dec ad.

The text basis for the May 15 ad will be more descriptive

20230502_134107.jpg8

 BUMP!

 

old auto dec 15 ad from computer.jpg



-- Edited by oshawacliff on Tuesday 2nd of May 2023 12:48:15 PM

 



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Have you considered lowering the price ? Maybe 39,999 ? 40 thousand plus is probably a line a lot of buyers won't cross.

 

Regards, Scott (LandShark ...)



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tag line not needed; get rid of it (in my opinion it is not needed.) let them call for information. This gives you time to actually talk to the potential customer, Let him ask his questions. Then it's up to you to warm him up. I don't think you need all the info copy? It just clutters up the ad.

good luck; Dale



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Why not go with "67 Impala for Sale"?

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Thank you all for your private message and reply's to my dilemma.

I decided to remove the LOOKING FOR A NEW CARETAKER  line.

The vinyl banner across the top of the windshield stays as well as the one on the rear window stating

For Sale  along with my email address for when the vehicle is parked. 

Comments on pricing.  

The last appraisal was for $52000.00 so I consider $42000.00 reasonable based on my 43 years of ownership and continuous upgrading of components.

The load of text.

Describes the progress of the vehicle from a 12 year old rusted vehicle rescued from a snow bank in Fenelon Falls.

It will be hard to let it go but I am sure I can find places to put some of those dollars to good use.

Cliff

May 15 issue

 



-- Edited by oshawacliff on Wednesday 3rd of May 2023 02:07:25 AM

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